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What are the most significant negative consequences of the massive expansion of car ownership?
Find and correct as many of the errors as you can but don't be disappointed if you don't find all of them.

One of the factor that distinguishes developed from developing economies is mass car ownership. Cars undoubtedly have practical benefits for the individuals which own them. They allow for more flexible and autonomous travel. Like other consumer items, they can be used to expressing individual taste and identity, however, they also clearly have a number of undesirable consequences.

One of these consequences is deteriorate in people's health. Urban pollution which is largely causing by vehicle emissions. It can cause respiratory problems such as asthma. This health problems is more prevalent in cities, particularly among children and the elderly. Noise pollution caused by car is another problem that can affect on people's health.

Another consequences of car use is a decline ni levels of physical activity and hence levels of fitness. Although this is partly a consequence of rising prosperity generally, there is evidence that car use is responsible to lower levels of cardiovascular fitness. The vast majority of car journeys are for less than two miles, that is, distances that can easily be covered on foot. In short, when people own the cars, they tend to walk less, thus removing a major means by which people maintain day-to-day fitness.

Finally, widespread car use can have a negative effect on community life. There is evident that people who live on streets with high volumes of traffic are less likely to know or interact with their neighbours. This too can have a negative impact on people's sense of well-being.

These factors alone are unlikely to discourage people from buying cars. However, more could be done to make the public more aware of the disadvantages of car ownership. Provide alternative means of transport would encourage people to use their cars less and enjoy some of the benefits of a car-free environment.

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